NARUTO: Explosion Series

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The Noob

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Join date : 2010-07-06

PostSubject: The Noobster W.I.P   Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:36 pm

Personal Information

Birthdate: 17/6

Birthsign: Gemini

Name: Benhimes Noob

Nickname: The Ventriloquist

The Noob is a man of many talents and faces so to speak. Behind every facade lies a different personality, which often comes to life through his puppets. The Noob is a Ventriloquist at heart and a very skillful one, able to project his voice quite loud forming different accents, moods, tone etc. Noob can often be seen with a Fox grin smile on his face, which can be quite unsettling. In addition to these little perks of his, the Shinobi is also very intelligent and cunning. Often very decisive, utilizing different strategies to devastating effects at time. The Noob’s personality cannot be defined since the Shinobi can be anyone. He has the voice to match along with the necessary personality and body language. Being a puppeteer it is not by coincidence that the man can be very manipulative. In accordance to his many personalities, that will be reflected through his puppets. The young Shinobi can be seen as emotionally unstable. Being able to switch from someone happy, to someone angry or sad instead. The Noob is the type of Shinobi that takes his work very seriously. Always looking to improve himself and so he indulges himself in training. Constantly aiming to become stronger and a more efficient Ventriloquist. The man believes that Art is something that takes time to perfect. If it is to be long lasting that is, which is the reason why, he adds new things to his puppets. By doing this, it gives the young Shinobi a sense of satisfaction, well just. Since he is never really satisfied with his work, almost as if nothing pleases him. Should one of his works become defective in his eyes, the Shinobi will look to work on it. Turning the ugly things into beauty, the defective into effective works of art.


Food (Most things that tastes good)
Learning new things


Lack of Appreciation for Art
Being Hungry
Ugly people

Physical Information

Gender: Male

Age: 13

Height: 4'7 inches

Weight: (In lbs - this is optional.)

Hair Color:
Black And White

Eye Color: Crimson

General Appearance:
Noob stands at 4'7 inches tall a little squirt by the looks of things. He has short spiky black and white hair. With the side of his hair being black and the Middle being white. The Shinobi is of a tanned skin colour with crimson eyes, that pierces the veru soul of others. Noob also sports black trousers and black sandals. The Shinobi's trousers will be carefully tucked into his sandals. On the side of his things are a pair of pouches, which housed Ninja weapons and scrolls. The Shinobi also sports a long sleeve fishnet under shirt of sorts. This under shirt stretches out onto his forearm, stopping a few inches away from his wrist. A pair of black fingerless gloves meets this under shirt as it extends over his wrist. Over his fishnet undershirt, the Noob also sports a red and black kimono. The Kimono is tied at the waist by a white obi. The Kimono had black flames designes decorated all over it. And of the back of this kimono is the symbol of a hand. More specifically one that resembles something being manipulated. Noob alsp spots a necklace made out of the Croc teeth. And a pair of Earings that was made by even small Croc teeth. Placed on his lower back, the Shinobi also carried around a scroll. At times some may even speculate, that his Puppets are kept in these scrolls. But no one ever knows since the Noob always changes his whole set up.

Clan Information

Clan: Benhimes

Kekke Genkai/Hiden:
The Clan doesn't seem to possess any real special abilities. Except that they utilize puppets really well in battle. They are also known to be ventriloquist, giving life to their puppets by giving them a voice and personality. The Clan members often insert chakra receivers into the puppets, that way they can use Jutsus through the puppets themselves. Which means the puppets possess the ability to use the Shinobi's elements. Keep in mind though that the Shinobi will be in control of all of this.

Head of the Household: Kyouga Benhimes

Social Information


Sponge Bob
Jona that Whale
Mister Platypus



Ninja Status

Affiliation: Sunagakure

Ninja Registration: 123674

Rank: Genin

Class: (D-rank for Genin.)

Academy Graduation Age: 9

Chakra Information

Water (Suiton)


Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: N/A
Rank: E
Class: Supplementary
Name: Bunshin No Jutsu (Clone Technique

Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.


Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: N/A
Rank: E-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Name: Kawarimi No Jutsu- Replacement Technique

Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.


Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: N/A
Rank: E- Rank
Class: Supplementary
Name: Henge No Jutsu- Transformation Technique

Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.


Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: N/A
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary

Name: Shunshin No Jutsu- Body Flicker Technique

Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.


Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: N/A
Rank: C-rank

Class: Supplementary
Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu - Puppetry Technique

Description: Kugutsu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to use a puppet to attack from afar. Using their body's chakra, the ninja emits strings of chakra that run from their fingers to the puppet. The puppet itself can be loaded with many weapons and tools, allowing the puppet master to remain hidden while the puppet moves and attacks the target.


Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Suiton
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist Technique

Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

Limitations: 5 posts Active, 2 Post cool down

Type: Ninjutsu
Nature: Suiton
Rank: C-S Rank (C-rank For Genin)
Class: Supplementary
Name: Poseidon- God Of Water

Description: The Poseidon Technique allows for the manipulation of water that the Shinobi creates. This includes moving the water by extending their chakra to it. The water can then become highly pressurized water waves, with the strength of a C-rank Technique. However the water can be used in such a way to cause blunt force damage, acting like a water bullet. The Shinobi can have it break off into water droplets that are highly pressurized to cause even more damage. This means the Shinobi is able to focus on multiple targets. The water will generally be used as a Combination technique. This of course happens when the Shinobi uses their puppets as a medium for the Jutsu.

Limitations: 5 posts usage, 2 posts cool down before using the technique.

Type: (Which kind of Jutsu is this exactly?)
Nature: (What is the chakra nature of this technique? If there even is one.)
Rank: (This Jutsu shouldn't be higher then D-rank, C-rank is exceptional, but, you shouldn't have very many C-rank jutsu as a Genin. )
Class: (Is this technique offensive, defensive, both, supplementary, collaboratively, illusionary?)
Name: (What is the name of this technique?)
Description: (How is this technique done? What does it do? What does it look like?)
Limitations: (How long does this technique last post-count wise? How long does it take for you to use it again post-count wise? This is optional depending on the Jutsu that your character has.)

Type: (Which kind of Jutsu is this exactly?)
Nature: (What is the chakra nature of this technique? If there even is one.)
Rank: (This Jutsu shouldn't be higher then D-rank, C-rank is exceptional, but, you shouldn't have very many C-rank jutsu as a Genin. )
Class: (Is this technique offensive, defensive, both, supplementary, collaboratively, illusionary?)
Name: (What is the name of this technique?)
Description: (How is this technique done? What does it do? What does it look like?)
Limitations: (How long does this technique last post-count wise? How long does it take for you to use it again post-count wise? This is optional depending on the Jutsu that your character has.)

Type: (Which kind of Jutsu is this exactly?)
Nature: (What is the chakra nature of this technique? If there even is one.)
Rank: (This Jutsu shouldn't be higher then D-rank, C-rank is exceptional, but, you shouldn't have very many C-rank jutsu as a Genin. )
Class: (Is this technique offensive, defensive, both, supplementary, collaboratively, illusionary?)
Name: (What is the name of this technique?)
Description: (How is this technique done? What does it do? What does it look like?)
Limitations: (How long does this technique last post-count wise? How long does it take for you to use it again post-count wise? This is optional depending on the Jutsu that your character has.)

Additional Jutsu

(Any jutsu that you create, or that your character has learned will be moved here. This only applies to those jutsu you've created, or learned AFTER your character application was approved. Only Administrators have the power to add the Jutsu you've created, or that you've learned to this section of the character app. You will leave this portion of the app. blank to start with.)


Ninja Tools: Most of The Noob's Ninja tools are stored in a scroll thus increasing the amount he can actually carry drastically. Mos projectile weapons will be used in combination with his puppets.

4x Puppets
300 Kunais
300 Swords
300 Senbons
300 Shuriken
300 Windmill Shuriken
300 Paper Bomb
300 Exloding Tag
300 Smoke Bombs
300 Wires
300 Files
20 Scrolls
5 Poisons
7 Antidotes

Primary Weapon:

Name: Dokuja
Type: Puppet
Rank: ?
Description: Dokuja is a 18ft Puppet in the form of a snake, that is also up to 1ft wide. Unlike most wooden puppets that are your typical brown wood colour. Dokuja is black with silver stripes running along the Body of the Puppet. Being modified to suit the Shinobi’s taste, it has mane like fur protecting the neck area of the puppet. This vibrant red fur adds even more to the puppets appearance standing out among the rest. The actual head of this snake is equipped with harmful tools. The 8inches long fangs that the Snake possesses are drenched in poison also. In which case the Puppeteer can use the snake to strike out at his targets. The fashion in which it performs this feat his very reminiscent of an actual snake attacking its prey. The eyes of the snake looks very serpentine in appearance. And in some cases will begin to glow as the Shinobi begins to manipulate the Puppet.

Special characteristics: Dokuja like all of The Noob’s Puppets is made from a special material. Throughout the years Noob’s clan has come to realized that even though, a puppet can be quite useful. It’s movements among other things can be quite restrictive. As such the clan members began using a special material when creating these puppets. The material itself is a lot lighter, being able to bend without necessarily breaking. The material is able to withstand a lot more damage, compared to other wooden puppets. Although the material that is used to create the puppets is not destructible. It does mean that the Puppets will last longer and is of course a lot stronger. Moving onto its mechanics, Dokuja is connected by joints, in which it can easily separate itself. This will allow the Shinobi to manipulate the joints individually. On the end of everyone of these joints is a blade protruding from it. And as one would expect these blades are also drenched in poison. If one was to do an autopsy on Dokuja, that would have noticed a couple of interesting things. Such as the way in which the weapons are stored inside the. Acting like a Gun in which the desired bullet will be fired according to the Shinobi’s will. Bullets of course meaning, Kunais etc. These weapons can be launched at great speeds at the nuts and bolts goes to work. Propelling each weapon forwards with speed and precision. There are 14 joints which comes together to form this puppet. For added protection on the outside of the puppet, the Shinobi can erect spikes/blades to cut or to even slice through someone. What truly makes each and every one of these puppets that the Noob’s clan utilizes. Is the Chakra receivers that are stored inside the puppet as part of his autonomy. These receivers allows the Shinobi to channel Their elemental chakra or even regular Chakra through the puppet. This will in turn allow the Shinobi to use elemental attacks through the puppet itself. At times setting traps for the unsuspecting opponent.

Personality: Why would a Puppet have a personality you asked? Well they don’t but the Shinobi in control of it, so happens to be a Ventriloquist. And with everyone of his works of art, comes along a personality which brings it to life. As for Dokuja, the puppets can often be heard releasing a typical hiss at the end of every sentence. It has no morals whatsoever and can be quite disgusting at times. Although this is nothing more than one of the Shinobi in control many personality. Being relayed to everyone through a Puppet in the form of a snake. Dokuja possess a deep and unrelenting voice and in some cases. May even speak unison with the Shinobi in control which is quite freaky.


Kunais (Poisonous)
Shurikens (Poisonous)
Senbons (Poisonous)
Katana Blades (Poisonous)
Kibaku Koishi~ Exploding pebbles( They are as strong as an exploding tag)
Chakra Receptors
Oil (This acts like a Cobra spitting Venom at times)
Doku Koishi~ Poison Pebbles (Exploding)
White Poison Gas/Mist (depends on what my character is trying to accomplish)

Below is Merely the Effect of the Poison that the Noob Uses. So its nothing more than a simple explanation following the given template.

Name: Shitsubou~ Despair:
Appearance: Shitsobu takes the form of either a green liquid or green mist. In some cases it can even be dispersed into the air as microscopic particles.

Rank: C
Special Abilities: Shitsobu’s main purpose is to find its way into the opponent’s blood stream. Whether it be through a break in the skin or it was simply inhaled by the Victim. Once inside it becomes a fast acting poison as it looks to hinder the opponent. Shitsubou’s effects will end in the Victim becoming paralyzed after a certain amount of time has passed. Once the poison gets into the body, the Victim’s upper body will become paralyzed after 4 posts. Carrying on from there the Victims whole body will be paralyzed after 8 posts has passed. As one would expect of any poison, there will be respiratory difficulties as the Victim finds it difficult to breathe. Muscles will contract and seize, rendering the Victim immobile. The poison normally last for 24 hours unless a Antidote was administered.

Origin: Shitsubou is one of the many poisons that was passed down to the clan members.

Secondary Weapon: Will be Available Soon

Biography & RP-Sample


Birth Arc:

Benhimes Noob was born in the Wind country as part of a clan that indulged themselves in the art of puppet making. The clan would often utilize these puppets in battle. But also stood out among the other puppeteers by actively bringing to life these puppets. This ranged from Giving the puppets a personality of their own, based on what the Shinobi thought was acceptable. From an earlier age Noob would take notes on how to make these puppets. Going as far as creating mini sized once in order to use as a toy. The fledgling was now coming of age and it was also a matter of time before he took over this trade. Although Noob was still young he managed to grasp the basics of puppet making. And what it meant to be a Ventriloquist as well, thus keeping in tact the clan’s reputation. But before the Shinobi could truly begin his journey to become a true Ventriloquist. He had to learn the basics of what it meant to be a Shinobi. And so the young warrior was sent off to the Academy in Sunagakure.

Academy Arc:

Once there he started learning the basic Ninjutsu techniques. Ones that just about every Shinobi must have learned at some point during their younger years. But that didn’t stop him from focusing on his duties at all. The Noob found himself studying at the Academy whilst being trained by members of his clan. He was seen as talented and as a result was pushed even harder. The young warrior had to undergo harsh training, a simple mistake and he was penalized. Creating Puppets is an Art and the end result needs to be beautiful. A defective Puppet will always be seen as an ugly instrument. And will often be tossed to the side and discarded by just about everyone. Noob was however thought not to look at things this way. Instead the Young Shinobi was thought to turn the ugly ducklings into the beautiful swan that they can be. Where other puppeteers failed the Ventriloquist would succeed. Carrying on with his training in order to began an exceptional Shinobi. It would only be a matter of time before Noob found himself at the forefront of his clan. And so his journey begins. While at the Academy, the Shinobi found himself to be less interested in friendship. His view of a living person was very different and can be quite harsh in terms of criticism. This caused the young Shinobi to shun others, only keeping a few friends. Only those that could truly understand how he works can be considered a friend. In his eyes a Puppet can be just as unreliable as any human. They're faulty in his eyes and will often prove to everyone that they're not worthy. However the difference between a human and a puppet is that, Noob could always change a Puppet to his liking. Give them a suitable personality or even a voice. Where as with most humans they always remained the same in his eyes, at least some. With his own philosophy in mind, the Noob soon look to raise himself above anything else. Constantly looking to separate himself from the rest, through his amazing feats. However no one knows just what the future holds for this young warrior.


The Shinobi known as the Noob was far away in dreamland with his head in the clouds. It was a good feeling, it felt as if his soul had left his body and was floating on cloud nine. However his tranquility didn't last for very long, his bestial peace was interrupted by a loud mouth. The Noob however made no sudden movements to show that he had acknowledged this person. Snapping back to reality, the young Genin had a fox grin on his face. His fingers began to move once more in a subtle manner. Tilting his head slowly in order to take a look at this loud person. His head slowly rotated mechanically like that of a puppets. With a glint in his eerie coupled with an eerie aura that came from him. Some might think it was his aura that caused this mist to form in such a place earlier. The Noob maintained his position perched on top of the grave stone. The young Genin had yet to utter a single word. Instead the pair of dead bodies sat up as if they were reanimated. Lifting their heads up, it was the woman that spoke first. "Shush young man, some of us are trying to rest in peace. This is one of the only place that we're left undisturbed by those with a beating heart". It was the voice of the woman that spoke earlier. She sounded like a mother scolding her child with mere words, she was commanding and very stern. And if one was paying attention they would have noticed that. The only movements made by the Noob, was the subtle movements by his throat.

"I think he was trying to wake the rest of the dead around this place. I can't be bothered to even get into a conversation with this loud mouth. He could never understand, only the one sitting above us can truly understand". The male corpse said, the Noob soon nodded in agreement with the corpse. Cocking his head off to the side a little. The young man looked at the older man and stuck his tongue out. It was the display of a child that had won where his older siblings had failed. And in this case it was the pair of corpse that was acting as the parents. The Noob's tongue soon retracted and was once again hidden away in his head. The intruder soon started to walk over towards him, but the Genin remained nonchalant. There wasn't any sudden movements at all, nothing from either of them. Upon til this point it was nothing but mere questions. Dealing with the living was such a pain in the ass, they always wanted to know stuff. They question just about every little thing, the minor details that didn't even matter. Besides why was this person even interested in the young Genin?

Although he should have, it would have been rude to release a sigh. No the Noob would add such a feature to one of the many personalities that he gave his toys. If this stranger could see pass the Noob's smile. He would pick up on the fact that the man didn't appreciate the manner in which he was approach. But perhaps the young Genin was being a little bit too touchy. "Ahh give him a chance and see what happens young one. I'm sure he's not that bad". The woman's corpse said once more, even interrupting what the Noob was about to say. "Yes I believe I do have one and its not Kid. So in order to avoid you upsetting me with your voice and disgusting features. I will tell you in order to avoid any future troubles savvy?". Even at this point the Fox grin smile was still plastered all over his face. There was a moment of silence as the dead whispered in his ears. If one decided to listen, they could perhaps hear these whispers. Then again some wouldn't be able to hear anything. Which meant the Noob can be seen as quite mad or just creepy. The young Genin was easily misunderstood by other, but it didn't bother him.

"I go by the name Benhimes Noob. You can call me by one or the other since it makes no difference to me Mr. And while we're on the subject what is your name?" . The Genin asked still with that unsettling smile on his face. Who knows if the man had a worthy name, the Noob might even name a toy after him. The Noob soon tilted his head some more in order to look by the older man. There was a young lady there with him. The Noob didn't pay much attention to her at all, that was until she said something intriguing to him. His smile was now directing at the woman, a soft smile this time. It was almost genuine, but it also judged the young lady. Was she trying to make fun of him? It wouldn't be the first time that someone living have tried it. "I hear them loud and clear, I can even get them to speak a lot louder if you want". Hopping from atop the grave stone, the Noob began focusing on the older male before him. This is normally when someone tried to be a smart ass. But who knows what will happen eh?
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PostSubject: Re: The Noobster W.I.P   Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:57 pm

Though I know you are still working on your character I would like to point out that you need to make your puppets in the Custom Weapons part of character creation before it can be approved. This should include an arsenal section for each this way your arsenal doesn't look so loaded.

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